I have a high ability year 9 set. The sort who are primed for early entry and school are hopeful of a decent crop of A grades from them. At the moment the SoW has us studying poetry; we are looking in particular at poetry from other cultures, and, after an observation where I was criticised for not pushing the top end high enough, we are reaching for the stars.
So far they have been great at the mechanics. They have been able to pick out techniques and to explore the meanings of certain words or phrases. Some of them have been able to offer alternative interpretations and are tentatively using phrases such as “it could mean X or maybe the writer means Y”.
So far, so proud.
What they have less confidence with and less of an ability to deal with is the context part of an A/A* grade. Being able to link to ”own experiences” has been a bit of a push for some; to “others’ experience” beyond the realms of my wildest fantasies – or so it seemed. These students appeared to have little imagination, understanding or empathy that there may be a different world view out there. Despite studying in a wildly multi-cultural school and living in a city with a diverse population they are still strangely insular. Getting them to react to poetry in a way that was beyond “it made me think” was really taking its toll. I really wanted them to start thinking about others, to view poetry as something real life – not just as a vague “thing” they “did” in English.
I began with the poem “The Right Word” by Imtiaz Dharker. I loved the poem on first reading and decided that it was brilliant for my purposes of peeling away layers of meaning. It was perfect for getting the students to see how other people may have differing views and perceptions of the same event. I was excited about sharing this poem with my class. Looking forward to the discussions about language it would generate. My first attempt at sharing this poem with them however fell a little flat. Instead of the awe and wonder I had expected, reaching the end of the poem I was met with a chorus of “eh?” and “what?” I was disappointed and confused. I had expected more of them – and told them so.
I soon came to realise that it was no surprise. I thought about them and came to the conclusion that it was the actual thinking that was challenging my students – that if I wanted them to think longer, harder and deeper about something then I had to show them how. They knew the words in the poem – understood them individually but could not relate them to each other. No wonder they then could not link those words to their own feelings or those of others.
As is my wont these days I took to twitter to try and find a solution. I knew that I was looking for something that would get my students thinking differently, I just wasn’t sure how to go about it. I skirted round the edges of reading about SOLO for quite a while; truly not sure I quite understood it myself and then decided to be BRAVE. (Well actually school told me to be BRAVE, it is BRAVE week next week, and I realised this was the push to me giving it a go.)
So I went for it. I read everything I could lay my hands on about SOLO. Watched @learningspy in a few videos from teachmeets; read a few blog posts by @lisajaneashes here and decided that this was what would work for my year 9. I planned feverishly, deciding to “borrow” an introductory activity from @TotallyWired77 to introduce the solo concept and away we went.
I started with the concept of thinking. We discussed the image and then using Tait’s lovely activities (sorry I can’t remember the exact link should have saved it) we ranked the “cleverness” of statements about both X Factor and Leeds United. This led us nicely into a discussion of why one statement was cleverer than another – what was it that allowed us to judge those statements? How did we KNOW that one person had more, deeper knowledge of a subject than the other?
Answers were thoughtful, considered and included gems such as:
“Miss, he’s just said one thing”
“There’s a few ideas here”
“This one has linked to other things –it’s comparing”
Which led me nicely to the following slide:
We discussed the phrases in black type – explored what they meant and at that point I gave them the words in colour and the SOLO Taxonomy sheet. We compared the extended abstract to A* grade criteria and found similarities immediately. I could see cog wheels turning and connections being made –they were ready for the next step.
In my slide show – each phase on the question grid came up separately – students discussed each square in groups then as a class.
They worked out the following:
- nouns are words, naming words and labels.
- Words choice is important so “you know what something is”
- Words can affect you because they can make you feel
- Your culture or experience matters because if you have been called names before those words might hurt you more. This led to lots of anecdotes about times students had been called names; and then to students linking in with gems such as “Like when we did that “Half Caste” poem Miss.
I was pleased with this and decided they were ready for the next step. I took them back to the poem “The Right Word” and gave them a new question grid.

Sorry they are a bit hard to read. From the centre 1. What are the nouns and verbs in the poem. 2. What do those words mean? 3. How does the image of the person change in each stanza? 4. How might someone’s culture or experiences change perceptions of the character?
And basically I let them loose. With no direction from me except for “start in the middle and work outwards” they were off. 20 minutes of beautiful, focused thinking ensued. I found myself floating round the classroom, almost awestruck, at how easy this had become and how well the class were working at this and answering the questions.
Our plenary focused on the technique – has it helped them think and therefore learn? A resounding YES! I’m not sure I got all the elements of SOLO quite right. But I do know I will certainly be trying it again.

